LET'S HOSPITAL ([info]rubbersoul1967) wrote,
@ 2009-05-22 00:27:00
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Entry tags:death note, fic, meme, sutenia

Death Note Drabble meme
Saw this meme on another site and decided it would be fun to do. I don't usually write fic cause I'm kinda insecure with writing.

1. Angst: "It is all right, commander Rester, that is not too personal a question at all," Near spoke, his voice default and consistent, "The last time I've ever truly felt sad was when I saw a dead cat at the age of seven -- Mello came close however, but I find that it's just a waste of time quite honestly,"his busy fingers briefly paused for a moment; they whispered.

2. AU!: Near threw the photos to the ground, "Gevanni, these are horrible! There's not a single shot of his face," Near glanced down at the pile of photos with second thoughts and took a few, tucking them into his pocket,

3. Crack!fic: The next day Kal Snyder had crowned his head with a garland of castrated posies, daisies and every single flower he could find; he twirled and skipped and turned and, with his hands clasped together, he sang with starry eyes, "OH MARILLA! MATTHEWWW! OHH I caaaaaaaaan't believe you got me a NEWWWW DRESS! AND. With PUFFY SLEEVES!"

4. Crossover: "Uhhh... oh! Yes," Gevanni cleared his throat and quickly summoned composure, "It appears this man is a well-known unlicensed doctor by the name of..... --well his name escapes me at the moment. He goes around performing medical miracles while charging outrageous fees. Do you... want me to do something about him?"

5. First Time: After a long day of avoiding him, Near grabbed Gevanni by his necktie and pulled him into a storage closet, "Mr. Loud, I understand that you may feel some shame but please don't let it impact the quality of your work."

6. Fluff: Mello smacked Near's messy head of hair with a rolled-up newspaper, "That's nice, but you didn't answer my question. Do you want scrambled eggs or not? We also have this... cereal fruit... thing --or whatever. So, yeah, make a decision fast."

7. Humor: Halle jabbed Gevanni in the shoulder, "Cheer up, Stephen, it's not all that uncommon to be asked out on a date in exchange for a lead. I've done it before," she cleared her thoat with a grin, "Though...never with a teenage girl. Just don't do anything illegal, neh? Hahaha, I think it's cute."

8. Hurt/Comfort: Now, Near was never too terribly close to Gevanni, but he was a valuable employee and something of a comrade so he felt it appropriate to visit him in the hospital (Though, he had to pull some strings just to see him), "Please get well soon," Gevanni was asleep however, and, for no real reason, Near brushed away strands from his eyes and forehead; He was a very attractive man, he thought.

9. Smut: On the elevator, Gevanni wrapped his arms around Near's waist from behind and pressed himself against the petite boy, the heat in his own body intensified and he soon found himself grinding against Near and breathing in the scent of his hair,"God, you smell so good."

10. UST: Near took Gevanni's large, warm hand into his own and slowly traced his finger along the lines of his palm, "This line here indicates that you're constantly bossed around by others. This is true, don't you think?"

11. Straight: Just before heading off to work, Halle sat at the edge of her bathtub and smiled at the naked young man inside, "Well, aren't you going to turn on the water? It's been over an hour now,"; the blonde slowly returned her smile.

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2.
I think creepy Near is kinda cute. Can you guess who he's crushing on? 8D

3. What do this guy and I have in common? We both love Anne of Green Gables.

4. Do yourself a favor and read or watch Black Jack. If you're going to watch it, I recommend the 1993 Black Jack OAV directed by Osamu Dezaki. It's a lot more serious than the most recent Black Jack TV anime and is about 10 episodes long with each ep roughly 45 minutes to an hour. The dub is actually pretty darn good (I believe the dub was done by the actual people who created the anime). However, it's difficult to find the DVDs (Especially since Central Park Media, it's distributor, went under recently) so I recommend finding it on Tokyo Tosho or maybe being awesome and buying the digital version on iTunes or elsewhere.

6.
Well, it's fluffy to me~

7.
I imagine a rich spoiled teenage girl and an overly-modest Gevanni.

10. And it would go like this:
"I don't -- well, perhaps, that is true..." Gevanni nervously but cautiously retracted his hand from Near's and rubbed it as if he had burned it.
"I lied. There is no such line. ...Do I honestly make you feel that way?"
Gevanni blushed, overcome with embarrassment, "I-I never said that!"




Of course these are all Death Note-related with lots of Near and Gevanni, although not all of the drabbles involve them.



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[info]aisu10
2009-05-22 08:47 pm UTC (link)
Oh my god I love these. xD Hilarious, cute, and sexy all together! 8D

I think I want to do this for my OC's, now. xD *goes to do so*

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-22 09:29 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for commenting. I was wondering if these were any good. I'm very insecure about my writing. Oh I forgot to ask! I'm curious about the allure of NearxGevanni. I do like it myself but I'm curious to know why you like them in this order.

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[info]aisu10
2009-05-22 09:41 pm UTC (link)
They're great, don't worry. ^o^

I like it because Gevanni (well, at least, my Gevanni) acts ridiculously uke and creepy dominant Near is sexy.
...Well, actually, it's just kinda crackish and I like it. xD

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-22 10:05 pm UTC (link)
Gevanni does have more of an uke personality doesn't he? I like to think that they switch it up every now and then or at least that Near is an agressive uke or that maybe they even have an S & M kind of relationship.

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[info]aisu10
2009-05-22 10:12 pm UTC (link)
Lol I'm not the best person for this kind of conversation as I've never read a fic over Teen rating. xDD

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-22 10:25 pm UTC (link)
Ahaha, oh sorry ;;;
I'm just so used to talking about such subjects so casually. ;;;;

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[info]aisu10
2009-05-22 10:27 pm UTC (link)
xD I don't care. Just know that most of it's going over my head, haha. ♥

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[info]reikai_chibi
2009-05-22 09:30 pm UTC (link)
AWESOME! ^-^

I may do this sometime.

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-22 09:45 pm UTC (link)
8D
Is there a particular one that you really like? One that you didn't like as much? Feel free to say whatever. C:

Edited at 2009-05-22 09:46 pm UTC

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[info]reikai_chibi
2009-05-23 12:10 am UTC (link)
I especially like 4, 5, 8, 9, and 10. There wasn't one that I didn't like, I like them all, although I'm not sure if I'm too fond of Gevanni/Halle. It -was- Gevanni in there right?

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-23 02:28 am UTC (link)
8D
I'm so happy to hear that! Those are my favorite too.

Actually, that is in fact Mello. The relationship between Halle and Mello in the manga is verrrrrrry different. I can tell you more if you like!

In fact, my icon right here has him sleeping in her bathtub.

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[info]reikai_chibi
2009-05-23 02:32 am UTC (link)
O.O

Seriously? Mello?

Never saw that coming XD

I want to know more. Halle and Mello? Interesting.

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-23 02:50 am UTC (link)
Oh yeah, it's implied that they're friends or maybe even something more. (In fact, I think Halle likes Mello a lot more than Near as a person) You can see how different their relationship is right here.

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[info]reikai_chibi
2009-05-23 02:58 am UTC (link)
Hmm, okay. I'll look at that. Thanks.

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[info]kaostic
2009-05-23 07:17 pm UTC (link)
No. 5 and No. 10 ARE SO CUTE. *A*
No. 2 dsfgsfgd, Mello's photos?
No. 1... T__T I'd like to think that he's just hiding the truth.

I think you really shouldn't feel insecure with your writing. Your drabbles are interesting to read. ^^

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-23 07:30 pm UTC (link)
Yes, those are Mello's photos indeed! ^_^

I do too. ;_; Near has so many secrets.

Oh thank you, thank you! It really makes me feel great to hear that. I spent quite a bit of time on these drabbles, making sure I liked it myself before going on to the next prompt.

These were really fun to make and put my mind at ease while doing them.

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[info]katsu_mari
2009-05-23 08:18 pm UTC (link)
Nice drabbles. On what site did you find this meme?

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-23 08:23 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

I found it on somebody's journal on mangabullet and just snagged it cause it looked fun.

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[info]kurosaki_akane
2009-05-23 08:59 pm UTC (link)
Very interesting drabbles! Number 1 broke my heart (TAT)

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-25 09:50 am UTC (link)
Thank you very much! c:

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[info]jengou
2009-05-25 04:21 pm UTC (link)
Ohh, these are cute! I love how these are all so visual. I imagined most of them drawn as comic strips in your art style <3 My favourites are 2, 5, 11, and 10 (and a huge soft spot for 3 even though I have no idea what's going on!).

I think 1 has potential to be a fic on its own (I love Near semi-mumbling to himself), but I don't understand his logic re: being sad about Mello was a waste of time but the dead cat wasn't?

A few didn't work for me (6, 7, 8), but I think that's cos of the difference in how we see characters. characterisation-wise, but that is so subjective anyway~

In 5 I'm curious as to why you used 'shame' (and not 'embarrassment'). Near is of legal age right? And what is backstory nngggg want to read it!

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-05-29 08:37 am UTC (link)
Hahaha, thank you!

Well, originally, I had thought up the first one with a lot more backstory (Near came from a well off family but it was fairly loveless). I just took this meme as an opportunity to write some of it down somewhere. Near was a small child when he saw the dead cat, so I'd like to think that back then he was much less jaded and cynical and maybe more open with his feelings because he was still fairly new to the world.
But, over time, he had learned to tuck away his feelings because, I suppose he discovered that he was a more efficient detective-to-be that way. Or, perhaps a series of events caused him to become that way. I'm not 100% sure yet myself.
Mm, but Near is all talk here. Deep down inside he really does feel a sense of loss. They grew up together after all.
Oh but I was inspired by this quote I saw on 4chan once. (Placed on pastebin because it's a bit long) I like trying to find out how somebody with Near's personality could come to be and this quote gave me some answers, I felt.

Mm, I understand! With 7 I guess maybe you're talking about Halle? TBH I'm not really sure how she works quite yet. I think I drew this Halle from fanartists I really like that tend to give her a playful personality. And about 8, yeah that was a bit of stretch. That one is kinda wish-fulfillment hahaha.

Of course, but Near looks so young anyway and, at this point, Gevanni hasn't made a strong connection with Near just yet and I guess he looks at what had happened between them as a one-time kind of thing. Maybe even a mistake.
Near quietly feels the same way too hence the word 'shame'. It is a rocky and awkward beginning to their relationship.

A backstory would be pretty fun to do. ^_^

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[info]jengou
2009-05-29 04:05 pm UTC (link)
Whee, discussion! (acckk, replied to post rather than yuor comment before, sorry for confusion)

I think I've grown to like Near a lot, and I think a lot of it has to do with his self-awareness and honesty with himself. Like he admits he doesn't want to go outside because he's scared, and he says some quite shameful things that others usually don't dare to say, "If we do this and we get it wrong, we only have to apologize and that's the end of it." So I guess why I was confused with 1 was, I think Near's response would be that he felt instantaneous sadness with the cat, but not truly sad with Mello because he held on to the hope that they would meet again? I don't think he would lie to Lester or himself re: liking Mello. And, he's so stubborn, I wouldn't be surprised if part of his incentive for catching Kira was linked to Mello :p

I also see it as, for Near, less of a 'tucking away his feelings' and more of a 'expressing feelings is a lot of work and unproductive because then the other person feels obliged to share his feelings and all emotion does is cloud jugement'. Does that make sense?

With 7, yes, I think it was Hal. She's so difficult to really grasp! I think I see her as more coy with a dry sense of humour, and in that situ I'd expect her to say something like, "Hopefully you'll even get laid and stop releasing all these distracting pheromones," just to get a reaction from Gevanni >:D With 8, I think it can work, but need a little bit more mental prep is all~

Backstory, backstory!

Ne, ne! What do you think of me doing this fic prompt for Near/Gevanni (or Mello/Near, your choice) and you do this fic prompt for Mello/Matt? 8D

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-06-04 11:19 am UTC (link)
Sorry for the slow reply but that was because I was seriously thinking about what you had to say about Near because I have this silly fear of making a character what I'd want to be instead of who they really are (which is something I do nooot want to do) so it really got me thinking! Thank you very much for pointing that out!

Halle with a dry sense of humor, I really like that. Hahaha

Sure, that could be very interesting but what exactly do you mean by that? The whole meme again? :)

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[info]jengou
2009-06-04 12:19 pm UTC (link)
Ahhh, please bear in mind that I don't think soooo much about Near, so you can disregard everything I said! :O I tend to come off as argumentative in my discussions even when I don't intend to, so please keep that in mind too.

Yep, I was thinking about the whole meme again~ If it's not too much work? If so, what pairing would you like me to write?

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-06-04 12:35 pm UTC (link)
Oh no, I'm very glad for it. ^^

Yeah, that'd be really fun. I was watching the anime again today and looking at a site that happened to have some MM fanart and it got me thinking about them. Mmmmm, how about Mello and Near? I'm very curious as to how you'll handle them! :D

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[info]jengou
2009-06-04 12:39 pm UTC (link)
Whew!

Yay, I'm really keen to see how you write MM! Can I request Mello/Matt rather than Matt/Mello though please? Hee, I am getting butterflies in my tummy. Happy to give Mello and Near a try - any preference on M/N or N/M, or do you not mind?

♥ ♥ ♥

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[info]rubbersoul1967
2009-06-04 12:45 pm UTC (link)
Oh, yeah sure. In fact, I think I'd enjoy that more. ^_^

Mmm, I don't have a preference. It can change with the prompt perhaps? Whatever you'd like. :)

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[info]jengou
2009-06-04 12:58 pm UTC (link)
What a cute icon!!

Ah, I am relieved about the flexibility, yay! Gonna get to it this weekend~

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